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Wednesday,April 1, 2009 by padairvanvleck

A FISH TALE

Small fish should abide by the rules
And swim in their own fishy-schools
But if they should tire
It’s all right to hire
The service of river carp-pools

9/91 Phyllis DeWitt-VanVleck

Posted in Animals, Humor, Limerick, Poetry | Tagged fish, schools, tale | 2 Comments

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on Wednesday,April 1, 2009 at 12:17 p04 | Reply Alice

this one not only made me laugh, but I love the pictures in my mind as I read it. A winner!
on Saturday,April 4, 2009 at 12:17 p04 | Reply padairvanvleck

I’m glad you liked it Alice. I wasn’t sure I had hit the mark.

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